How to avoid using run-on sentences advice from Juicy Sex Stories.

A run-on (fused) sentence is when a sentence has 2 separate ideas mushed together.

These sentences are annoying for readers because they are difficult to follow.

Run-on sentences make it hard for the reader to follow your train of thought.

Sometimes the problem is so bad that your reader gives up and goes on to another story...

Avoiding run-on sentences is simple. Follow one this simple rule and you’ll be fine.

Only use one idea per sentence.

Just one idea then a full stop. Simple.

Here’s an example of a run on sentence

She opened her legs and I could see her pussy mostly shaved with a thin strip of pubes right in the middle of her pussy mound I felt my cock throb.

Here's how to write it using one idea per sentence

She opened her legs. I could see her pussy was mostly shaved, with a thin strip of pubes right in the middle of her pussy mound. My cock started to throb.

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