How to format paragraphs of erotica - advice from Juicy Sex StoriesM

Remember that when readers enjoy erotica online they won’t read long paragraphs. If you take time to break up your sex story you will get better scores and great feedback from Juicy readers.

Here’s when to start a new paragraph

- when a new person starts talking

- when you move to a new part of a scene

- when you move to a new part of the plot

- when an existing paragraph is more than 4-5 lines long.

Here’s an example where the paragraphs are all bunched up

I leaned over and now my hand was lightly touching Lily’s leg. She didn’t flinch as I said quietly in her ears that I intended to take her home and fuck every last inch of her, spreading her as wide as she can be and filling her with loads and loads of cum. My hand now reached her thigh, where her stockings ended and her flesh became available under the table, for my hand only. I slowly explored further between her thighs until my hand brushed over her womanhood. As Lily began losing sight and sense of everyone and everything in the room, I continued to softly feel her guarded pussy. Clair, the happy blond from behind the bar, appeared to collect our used glasses and the empty bottle, stopping to chat and suggesting we head down to Manly later as that’s where she was headed after work. An invitation, hmm, ‘Maybe’, I said, my hand still slightly rubbing Lily’s now moistening pussy as we spoke. As Clair left, I asked Lily if she had ever had a threesome and to my surprise this confident go-getting sexual goddess replied, 'no'.

And here’s how you would need to edit it for Juicy sex stories

I leaned over and now my hand was lightly touching Lily's leg. She didn't flinch as I said quietly in her ears that I intended to 'take her home and fuck every last inch of her, spreading her as wide as she can be and filling her with loads and loads of cum'.

My hand now reached her thigh, where her stockings ended and her flesh became available under the table, for my hand only. I slowly explored further between her thighs until my hand brushed over her womanhood.

As Lily began losing sight and sense of everyone and everything in the room, I continued to softly feel her guarded pussy.

Clair, the happy blond from behind the bar, appeared to collect our used glasses and the empty bottle. She stopped to chat - suggesting we head down to Manly later as 'that's where she was headed after work'.

An invitation, hmm..

"Maybe", I said, my hand still slightly rubbing Lily's now moistening pussy as we spoke.

As Clair left, I asked Lily if she had ever had a threesome and to my surprise this confident go-getting sexual goddess replied,

"No".

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